I Fell Too Quickly
You pushed me down a well,
But didn't leave,
Just stayed staring
Bringing others to help pull me out
But they could do nothing.
I yelled and my problems echoed
My emotions hitting the wall
I could not contain the pain.
God, I felt like the walls were closing in.
Choking me like the love I could not shake,
The love I handed over timidly, but fully.
And you took that trust and let it sink.
Sink to the bottom of a hole!
I thought I could love you forever,
but it turns out, you wouldn't let me.
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