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"I Identify as Tired"


G-d I’m tired

I’m tired of working, trying to attain the wherewithal

All this work, I wish I was retired

It’ll be my downfall

Fucking you should make me feel like somebody

But I started overworking after all

Starting to feel like a dead body

You’ll be my downfall

This life has got me uninspired

I just want some alcohol

Drinking when my medicine is working

Might prove to be my downfall afterall

 
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