I Just Fell in Some Love
I fell in love
It was warm
Pleasant, kind of
It didn’t have a form
Well maybe those deep eyes
They hypnotize
It was like quicksand
You offered me your hand
But you pulled me under
Why, I could only wonder
Love was like water
Learn to swim or falter
I think I drowned
I couldn’t make a sound
I fell in love but it wasn’t a soft landing
I had no understanding
It knocked the wind out of me
No jump on count of three
Once I got out
I had to live without
The warm smile
Your handsome profile
The why don’t you stay awhile
Like stepping out of a warm bath
I was thrown off path
Stumbling in the dark
My heart with an everlasting mark
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