I just want to achieve

May 9, 2020

I have fallen

I have cried

I have been rejected

I have failed

My failures still press against my back

It’s hurts

It’s makes me wanna cry

I want my failures to die

Why can't I achieve

Why can't I succeed

Why can it just happen

My dreams are so bright

But is my chance in the light?

I just want to succeed

I just want to be happy

I just want to achieve

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__mru___254May 9, 2020

<p>this stuf hits differently it witten beautifully n yes you are gonna get success :)</p>