I Lost

January 30, 2018

I'm sorry, but I lost

I tried to hold on as long as i could waiting for you

I lost. Once I said,

To keep breathing just do it, you need to fight

and I tried, I swear i did but what can i do

like a withering flower without water

that was me without the need to survive

I'm sorry, but i lost.

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TamingOfSeaWolvesJan 30, 2018

<p>sad,beautiful simple and still enough emotion to make you smile with tears in your eyes.</p>