i love you

by raelynn.keith

September 26, 2017

every bit of you was made piece by piece you were made differently from others, your smile

your skin tone your family mexican, black, white, purtorican, i love you cause your not like others

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yc4Sep 26, 2017

the first line of this poem really caught my eye. i like how deliberate and careful "made piece by piece" sounded and it really worked towards your theme about uniqueness and love. but i wish your poem was longer and there was some more details on why you love that person so it could be more personal. i am also a little disappointed that your poem ended with the cliche line of "i love you cause your not like the others"...there are also 2 grammar mistakes that could've been easily fixed like puerto rican and you're.