I MADE A PROMISE

June 8, 2016

I Made A Promise

You are my treasure , my world, my fame;
You are my knight when you saved my life
From all that pain and shame in that pouring rain ,
I cried you hard every tear my name ,

You gave me your heart with no cost ,
Your love gave me a new start ,
Joy runs through me like the Flu ,
Your name is carved all over my heart ,

You given me love and this time I didn't run,
I know look you in the eyes and see your love
For me , This is something new to me .

Your love is a new found treasure to me ,
Something I want to keep and your name ,
I know love you and you give me a peace of mind;

You are my dream come true I love you
Just the way you are ,
You give me laughter through all the pains of my
Crying showers , I give you my word I will never
Let go of your love even if this pain try's to make its way back
And give me rain ,

You take in all my heart and made a spark that last
For life , You  warmth my soul and had taken my
Heart out of the cold and made it whole ,

So willing and free you given me your all so blissfully
I give you a promise to have and to hold and to never
Let our love never go .

Lilly Emery (C)

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Poetic Judy Lilly Emery

To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery /Judy Emery

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