I Need You

Location

37040
United States
36° 28' 20.208" N, 87° 21' 40.3956" W

The pain
Of losing a dad, not once but twice again
The tears long and hard
damaging my brain
I'm asking why
The hurt inside comes like rain
A thunderstorm
Being born and it wants to come out
but only leaking
silent leaking
from my eyes
Bloodshot eyes
I can only cry to let it out
There's no other exit
Other than my mouth
But that's closed by Officer Doubt
Can you here it?
No your not listening
You've got better things to do
Don't worry about it
because my daddies do too
Is it me? Or is it mom? Or is it you?
Dad answer me! Can't you see?
I need you...

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