I Remember A Time...(Unfinished/Just some thoughts)
I remember a time where life was different
Where I could be me
Or who ever I wanted to be
Where freedom to be me didn't require a months rent
I remember a time where smiling wasn't asked
When laughing was consistant
and snorting like a pig was not meant
When freedom to be me didn't require me to be masked
I remember a time that I felt alive
Where I could bask all day in the rays of the sun
and where I wasn't wanting to run
Where freedom to be me didn't require me to survive
I remember a time that was filled with happiness
When family dinners where at the table
and sometimes sneaking the dog food if able
Where freedom to be me didn't require loneliness
I remember a time where there was so many opportunities
Where I could do anything and everything in a day
and still have time to play
Where freedom to be me didn't require fees
I remember a time that seems as real as pluto
Where freedom to be me didn't feel life a sorrow
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