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I See

by HopefulMe

I keep seeing

I keep…..seeing

Your eyes

Your smile

Hearing

The way you laugh

Thinking of

How you talk

Remembering

How fast my heart beats when your near

The warmth of your hand in mine

The softness of your eyes

How i would catch you staring

When you would grin at my blush

The long nights when all i could do was think…

Of the pains that you go through

The demons you fight

The fake smile you use as a defense

To hide...the truth

But unlike others

I see

 
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Comments (3)

upnorthdavid
This poem is wonderful. The lines are arranged very cleverly. I love the repetition in the ending. The wording is powerful, because it connects with any person who has loved and desired to get closer to the person you love. Check out a poem I posted called "Sparkle"
S.zaynab.k
<p>A charming love poem, alluring and poetic short n sweet, will mean the world to a love. Kudos.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>pleez do comment under my newest poem too, comments are not common here but I like meeting poets via comments.</p>
LittleBoots47
<p>Powerful <strong>stuff</strong>. This really is something special, you have a talent.</p>

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