I shouldn't have relied on you

Sun, 05/05/2013 - 12:28 -- 0bsi

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75116
United States
32° 39' 27.2844" N, 96° 54' 55.9692" W

I bet you don't even notice
That your criticisms really hurt
Please try to screen
The awful things that you blurt.

I don't want to hear you
So just talk to yourself 
Stop telling me about the material things
Screw you and your wealth.

It takes more than money
To be a good person
Because as I get older
This relationship just worsens.

I can't even trust you
With the simplest things
This puppet, from your hand,
Has ripped away it's strings

Stop yelling at me about random subjects
That have nothing to do with me
I just want peace and quiet
But you never let me be

After college, I don't want to see you again

Let's just travel a different way

Oh, and my apologies if I'm too late or early,

But... Happy Mother's Day.

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0bsi

I can't really say much about this. I hope it made sense for or did something for somebody, I just poured my frustration out, in hopes that I'd be good at something; I shouldn't be lazy.

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