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I still remember the day


I still remember the day you told me you loved me

It’s one of my favorite memories I replay in my head

We walked along the river and you looked at me like I really was someone special

Like I was a comet that only shoots by every thousand years

You had this big smile and asked how you got so lucky

Then you told me you loved me and you would always love me

You said if you lost me it would be the biggest mistake of your life

 

I wonder if you remember that day like I do

Because you’re the one that walked away

You looked at her like she was the most special person in the world

Like she was a comet that shot by once every thousand years

I wonder if you realized you made the biggest mistake of your life

Or if I did by believing you.

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