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I wanted to say


I hurt you and never apologized and i wanted to say and I mean this sincerely like, really no joke I don't care
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frog3

they/it just a silly guy who loves frogs :3 if u wanna check out any of my other poetry accounts, try going to poetry.com or poeticous.com, where I post similar poems :D

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal confession about hurt and apathy; autobiographical moment

SparseMeasureDense

Few distinct ideas: apology setup, sincerity claim, emotional disconnect

DarkSentimentBright

Negative emotional valence; apathy, hurt, lack of remorse predominate

StillEnergyExplosive

Conversational intensity with casual interjections; builds toward sharp finale

MicroLengthEpic

Only 11 lines; micro to short range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative, conversational phrasing

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric interior voice; direct first-person confession without narrative distance

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frog3
MY poem got on the prompt of the day without me even knowing?????? wow...... i wrote this poem in may, wth. i didn't write it for the prompt of the day thingy-

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