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I Will Put You Through A Telescope


I will put you through a telescope

I will put you through a telescope

To see what I see

I will lend you my heart for a day

You to feel

What I feel

I will tear my heart open

Hurt like I do

I will place my mind into your mind

Feel my chaos taking over my once

Clear mind

Scent my insanity

That constantly rewinds

Iike a non-stop video recorder

Morning in night out

Feel what I feel

Scent what I scent

Breath through me

Hurt like I do

For you to feel what I feel!

Walk a mile within

My spirits

My heart

My soul

My mind

My spirits

My heart

My soul

My mind

I am giving you everything within

These two bare hands

but, you are hanging me dry in the

cold

Walk a mile within my shoes

For a day of my insanity!

 
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