i wish

October 28, 2015

i wish you would notice

how my hair is thinner

my stomach is flatter

and my eyes are always red.

i wish you would notice

when I dont sleep

how my face is pale

and i dont pay attention

i wish you would notice

how i'm changing

how i'm leaving

how i'm dying.

i wish you would notice

i wish you would help

i wish you would care.

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