I wish it never ENDs...
I could feel her soft hands brushing my back
Relaxed I could see nothing but black
Perhaps my eyes, she had closed
Revealing unknown pains, comfort she proposed
I felt elevated, there near her
It was awesome, the misery, the world was blur
I finally gave in to her control
She stilled my body, I was no longer able to roll
Softness below my head, comfort it led
I felt free as if I was long dead
There I laid with my closed eyes
She giving me cares, bliss I could realise
Oh! Sleep I wish You could stay
Escaping this world, you gave me a way
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