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I wish you were there


From the day we are born our mothers our the people we cherish A relationship is made that we never want to perish. But we grow up and we learn. As a baby girl I never knew right from wrong My mother was strong. I wanted to be just like her. But somewhere along the line something went missing. I was growing up and she wasnt there. How to shave, how to brush my hair, how to wash my hair. All of it. She wasn't there. I watched all little girls do things with their mom. Have a house with their mom. Its all I wanted. But she stood still in time. Eventually I moved on from nursery rhymes and needed to learn how to be a girl. She wasn't there. I had to do it alone. But the job is done and now all I have to say is...I wish you was there.
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S.zaynab.k
<p>Wow such a touching poem on behalf of an orphan. So movingly sad but hope is always there n God is better than mothers at caring. Thumbs up for u express so superbly. Kudos.</p><p><span style="color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 23px; -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(130, 98, 83, 0.0980392); text-decoration: -webkit-letterpress;">&nbsp;. pls do review my latest poem too, I&#39;m quite new here but have been writing elsewhere for ages and readers say they get messages for life from my poems. So pls add your thoughts under it.</span></p>

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