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I Wished Upon The Stars


You know how all the little things Get noticed when the times are grim? So, once, when I got pretty sick And thought maybe my world just dimmed, I looked up to the sky And saw that tiny light. At first, it was a glimmer Not sure if it could linger Amidst the darkened smoke Which left no place for hope. But then to aid came dozens Of little golden fighters That pierced right through the smoke And gave the Moon its throne. Thus was the glimmer saved, Albeit I lost its trace Among its fellow comrades Who sheltered all the homeless. But still, despite a tinge of fright, I truly hoped, one day I might Find people who would be my home, My beacon when I can’t go on. That’s how I weathered gloomy nights: Although my inner light had died, I saw the one up high above Because I wished upon the stars.
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Bubble Bee

Hi! I'm a student and a huge fan of poetry! I don't usually talk about my feelings in front of others and poetry allows me to express myself without worrying about judgement or misunderstanding. I hope that you'll be able to find your safe haven in my poems, too ;D

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal illness experience with universal hope metaphor through stars/light.

SparseMeasureDense

Moderate pacing; roughly 2-3 thematic ideas per 10 lines, steady development.

DarkSentimentBright

Begins dark but resolves hopeful; ultimately affirming despite struggle acknowledged.

StillEnergyExplosive

Contemplative voice with gentle movement; not explosive, sustained rather than kinetic.

MicroLengthEpic

32 lines total; falls in 31-60 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphor (illness as darkness, stars/light as hope/people); extended celestial imagery.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; introspective, reflective first-person throughout.

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