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Icarus


My father wished to give me freedom
 
Certainly not death 
 
But my disobedience brought me to my fall
 
I should’ve listened to his warnings 
 
But the freedom was just to great
 
Mortals couldn’t fly, but I was doing just fine
 
That taste of what it is to fly brought me to my death
 
I'm sorry to my father who know grieves my death
 
Father I am sorry,
 
Freedom was just great.
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Comments (2)

ClassicEmm
<p>I really like it! I think if you work on it a bit more it has really great potential especially the ending.</p>
sarabirodriguez
<p>Inspired after reading the story of Icarus</p>

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