If you were here

Sat, 02/03/2018 - 21:02 -- nlong

If you were here you could hear my first words

If you were here we'd be playmates

If you were here I could say " I love you" everyday

If you were here I wouldn't be sad 

If you were here I would admire you

If you were here I could see you with mom everyday

If you were here I wouldn't be dissapointed

If you were here you could teach me my ABC's

If you were here you could make hand turkey paintings with me

If you were here you could teach me math facts

If you were here you could come to my concerts

If you were here you could help me through highschool

If you were here you could help me study for exams

If you were here you could help me find the perfect college

If you were here you could see me at graduation

If you were here you could see all my accomplishments 

If you were here we could grow.........together.

 

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Me
My family
Our world
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nlong

I hope you guys like my poem!! Can you guys also comment and tell me what you think and what I can improve on,Thanks!!! 

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