if your gona yell
All this noise
All this anger
Capable of penetrating the thickest alloys
Like an ex commander
Red as the demonic
Making me frantic
Flinching at every word
Feeling absurd
Closing my eyes
You ask me why I flinch and close my eyes
You ask if you’ve ever hit
Silence …
ANWSER ME!!!
Me: it’s just …
You: just what?
Me: if you’re going yell … can you try not to spit?
You: @$$%^&$^ $&&%%^
You storm out
i began to pout
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I believe every body has something they have in massive amount and I say they have " (blank) for days , well I have energy for days I am that skiny kid in the back no body knows I'm that boy that's always reading in the libery instead of on the jungle gym I don't do small poems (roses are red vilots are blue blah blah blah) I write about the things that I feel is a problem or about events that are happening to me my 1st poem I wrote was wen I was 8 when my dog died it was called internal monster I excel at the classic free verse combo method of poetry and I plan on taking the mvp award within a year
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