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Ignition


My car awakens.

The instrument cluster pours light into the cabin;

transitioning from a silent tomb to a caged storm.

The RPM surges, searching for that calm called idle.

Moments pass, and the gear engages; 

a new cog caught in the teeth of forward motion.

 

I awaken.

Consciousness floods my senses;

to the helm of command.

My thoughts rev high, until they settle into steady control.

Moments pass, and I step out the door;

a new day locked into gear.

 

Steel and flesh, sharing the same ignition:

pistons and pulses, circuits and synapses.

Bound by direction, fueled by intent.

We accelerate to arrive until both engines seize:

alone on the shoulder as the road forgets us.

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El Bzaz

I write poetry in my spare time, usually when something clicks or catches my attention. Just whatever feels worth putting into words.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal awakening paralleled with abstract meditation on mortality and purpose.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple layered ideas densely packed; car/consciousness metaphor threads throughout.

DarkSentimentBright

Contemplative with existential dread; ends in abandonment and decay despite vitality.

StillEnergyExplosive

Surging, kinetic language: rev, surge, accelerate; mechanical tension throughout.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 22 lines; falls within 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphor (car as self), personification (awakens), simile (caged storm).

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric internal reflection with slight dramatic tension via extended metaphor.

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