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I'll visit one day


I saw your body laying there you didnt even look real I say you from across the room I didnt want to come near but I knew it was you one by one I see everyone come I see your mom and dad your sister and brother your whole family is here there looking t me like if I'm a stranger I guess I am since I've never met them before I see are old friends they walk up to great you your best friend is crying I'm frozen with fear it's almost my turn to see you how will I react in holding back my tears please tell me you're still here i dont want to believe this it isn't true i finally got to see you and the tears are let loose your body is laying there you feel so cold i kiss you goodbye please open your eyes give me a smile hug me so tight it's time to put you to rest please I dont want to let you go your going into the ground it's so cold and you will be alone surrounded by others yet no one says a thing In going to miss you more them you know I'll come visit you in a while I'll try to bring flowers and some small cakes to i know you dont like sweets but i sure do i remember when you would eat them with me we would talk for hours maybe one day i can drop by when I'm ready when my heart can take it I miss you I'll visit you when I can RIP issac
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upnorthdavid
This piece is so raw, so honest, so open. I posted a piece called the Worst Day. It deals with the same matter. What you've experienced is one of life's most difficult things. How to heal the hole? How to deal? You nailed it with this one, you're a beautiful writer, thank you for sharing. Feel free to post back...all the best

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