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I'm doing fine


I'm just a little bit off. I'm just a little bit out of it. I'm just a little crazy and everyone knows it. And maybe it's true what they say. I've got my head up in the clouds. And if work real hard and act all tough. I can have my way. I'm just a little bit tired. I'm just a little sick of this. Cause every time I take one step forward I'm pushed back six. I'm just a little exhausted. But I push it all aside. So to answer you question sir. I'm doing fine. I'm just a little bit sad. I'm just a little bit depressed. Someone told me my bestfriend passed away. I'm just a little bit lonely. But I've got my music and violin. So to answer your question mam. I'm doing fine.
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
life is about progression keep your friend's spirit by achieving more in your life your poem does a great job in reflecting your feelings keep writing-im a power poetry mentor

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