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I'm Sick of It


I've heard way too many people claim they are the best rapper breathing, since everyone spittin like they're teething and breathing fire on tracks while they got heat on them that will make you stop breathing, and they've used it so many times they don't hesitate a breath as they watch you take your last breath and put you to death, but honestly that's starting to sound dead, and I'm not gonna claim that I'm deaf too the explicit rappers because I be bumping their music out on my deck, but wut I'm saying is rap needs get some more depth
because it's so shallow that if you got a girl who will swallow and a gun that brings sorrow wit some money and gold chains that follow, then you can claim your rhymes should be considered hallow, even though your music is hollow and the furthest thing from a halo as it teaches people to be cold like hail and too hail
too a lifestyle that keeps you in a constant haze, and I just wish more people would appreciate the music that challenges you too gaze into yourself and quit the daily graze of that grass that puts you in a daze as you waste away your days, and just imagine if the best rappers changed their ways so they would affect the girl who lays down too soak up some rays and when she raised, up she just listened too some of most clever artist raise her up,
because they are rapping too build and heal instead of about who they've killed wit steel,
and I just can fathom whatt we could fasten too our culture if we stopped taking about fashion, and more on how to fatten the soul by giving food to those who live in famine and only have a fraction of enough and have too ration, and we don't understand God has a patent on every soul, so we should have a passion too respect our Lord's property
but this world is falling down a deep chasm because it's so causal to rap about how you casually cause casualties and I caution you too not follow what the world says is common because many ppls souls sleep more than a possum

 

 

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kdnewell

Words are incredibly powerful and I just want to use their power the best way I can to show people who God is

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