I'm swimming in this
I'm swimming in this consuming darkness as my flesh rips open burning the light inside of me. I am suffocating. Each intake is hallow and cold, with each breath I unfold. It's getting darker and my eyes wont open. I'm paralyzed with the fear of dying but at peace with leaving this selfish world. I let the frigid breeze dry out from my last breath. I can feel my heartbeat weaken with every breath. My skin turns to ice, freezing all that was good left in me. I'm devoured by a detestation so powerful it almost stole me from my last breath.
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