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I'm Worried


Can I change? If you can take this plague from me. Make it right. Fight for me. Me myself I'm Drama-Free. Cordial full of meekness and humility,and this is killing me. I need a victory! It seems like nobody is standing next to me, and I gotta deal with this tremendous feat. I have been defeated a tripple threat attack. Their intelligence was only by chance, but they have the upperhand, TIME AS IT STANDS I'M WORRIED
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samueltfranklin
The continuous repetition of the word "me" really puts emphasis and pressure on the narrator, underscoring the narrator's worry and anxiety. It's a very strong indirect continuation of the poem's theme.

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