Im young but not dumb

July 2, 2013

I may be young but i aint dumb.

I’m from a place where making it out is far from my reach.

I Been through all the ups and downs

But I still over come.

People slam doors doors in my face so

I built intentions, dreamed of white picket fences and dreamed of just making it.

I'm a fighter and I came to win every obstacle that comes before.

I’m a animal, defeating every obstacle

Everything is changeable,

well nothing is impossible.

you try to get the best of me

by throwing in that fact that i aint making it.

I Don’t act aggressively

Instead i kill them with success successfully

Even though you telling me I can’t do it

Cause you think its too farfetched for me to handle.

The Shortcomings that I had in my life led them to think that making it is impossible.

But When the odds are against me i just don't give it up

I Pick an occasion, and go after it

Cause Imma rise to it

And imma pay intentions

On making it.

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takeamomentJul 4, 2013

<p>Awesome performance you should post the words behind it. Great message by the way</p>