Imagine

What if?
What if I could hear
a noise that you
couldn't...
What would that mean?

Because it's more
than just
noises.

You're all one-sided
And not considering
And I've been trying to tell you
about the things that I am hearing, too.

If you'd only listen
maybe then
you could hear what I've been
hearing.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

what would it mean?
add more stanzas to the poem
sounds very mysterious, but very real
i'm a power poetry mentor-keep writing
it helps build off your ideas

you_wish94

Sorry, I should've put a disclaimer. A lot of what I'm posting is my stuff from as early as 2008. But thanks, I will add to this one.

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