Imprisoned Grooms
The flip side
of dimension
the angle
of a curve
The silence of
a shouting mute
the last
unfeeling nerve
Description
serves in
lonely cells
its commutation stark
Where sentenced
and imprisoned grooms
forever
— wed the dark
(Dreamsleep: February, 2026)
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Philosophical abstraction on silence, dimension, imprisonment; minimal autobiographical anchor.
Extreme density: paradox, constraint, metaphysical concepts compressed into fragmented lines.
Strongly negative: imprisonment, darkness, muteness, loneliness dominate throughout.
Kinetic tension through fragmentation, ampersands, em-dashes; compressed syntax creates urgency.
Micro poem: approximately 6 lines with heavy spacing; under 10 words per line.
Dense oxymoron, paradox, metaphor: silence of shouting mute, imprisoned grooms wed dark.
Predominantly lyric introspection with slight narrative description of imprisoned subjects.
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