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Indescribable Feeling


You know that feeling, when you feel like you cannot breathe normally and feel your heartbeats race with each other?

That moment when you feel like your life will never be the same?

When you have your eyes wide open, unable to turn your face away, knowing that only pain can come from the beauty in those eyes?

You know that moment that people usually call “coup the foudre”.

How cliché.

Being hit by lightning kills you but this feeling, this feeling… this feeling that your life never started before that moment.

This feeling that you’re finally living what you were created for.

Yes, I guess something is dying but how precious, how fragile is this new green sprout that stretches out from your heart with a sleepy sigh? 

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