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India


 

India 

 

Today is the day 

where the motherland 

is finally free

 

the land that suffered many things 

where people sacrificed to save this holy land 

from the horror, the devastation

 

the land that has kept us together 

where all of us are together as one

 

the land that has a colorful sky 

the land that lights up the ground to the sky

where it celebrates the creators 

everyone of different castes come together 

to honor the them 

 

thy are thankful for showering their love as droplets 

the soil that grows thicker and thicker 

 

the land that make us her own

makes us feel at home 

 

the land where the gangas  the yamuma flows

 

66 years finally passed 

in these years we mored, we cried, we celebrated 

as time passed this motherland has kept us together and will forever  

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Comments (2)

uppi1995
<p>Thankyou so much for the comment. I am happy im able to to make peopl imgane with im writing.&nbsp;</p>
Rojas
<p>This poem is beautiful. OMG.</p><p>I love how you integrated the love for the land and eath into this poem.</p><p>in some societies we are programed to forget to bless the land with our grace and meditations,</p><p>but you were able to put that in a poem.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&quot;the land that make us her own</p><p>makes us feel at home&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>the land where the gangas&nbsp; the yamuma flows&quot;</p><p>(these lines are my favorite. I was able to get a sense of</p><p>the culture deeper. this is an example of the power of your</p><p>language and love.)</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>continue to post poems because your voice is needed and loved.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>best,</p><p>rojas</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

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