Inhale
Taken for pleasure,
at leisure.
*
Setting a measure,
no pressure.
*
Inhaling sustenance
Exhaling life
*
The goal was high pleasure,
the warnings were clearly spelled
in letters to DIE YOUNG.
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_"Haha...a message for the young,_
_and I'm past young age..."_
my thoughts
until my organs gave in.
*
Take in....now out!
Decades fade away
at exhalation
of ingest.
*
Take in...now out!
organs of a dying old
younger than
my entire youthfulness.
*
Take in...now out!
My youthful self
more fragile in shape
than the wrinkles of the old.
*
At every respiratory process
my life was zapped!
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I'm dead-lost
in my consciousness
a total mirage of being to my reality.
*
Buried while breathing,
I buried myself alive.
*
For my inhaled breaths
add more death than life.
A complete reverse of man's respiratory cycle.
*
🚭 SMOKERS ARE LIABLE TO DIE YOUNG! 🚭
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