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Insomnia (Bad, Worse, Worst)


It’s bad when time pauses

A split second in between laughs

A drop of doubt plinking into vast lakes

 

And it’s worse when you’re alone

Like the black notes between ivory whites

Like a vacant emptiness, seemingly forever

 

But it’s worst before sleep

Thoughts that in the day lurked rather than prowl

Dreams of bridges and falling, of cars and collision.

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Comments (3)

ray21
<p>I love this! I love the reference to the sharp notes.&nbsp; Powerful metaphor!&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
ray21
<p>I love this! I love the reference to the sharp notes.&nbsp; Powerful metaphor!&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
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Great poem Very creatively written piece There is light that sheds through darkness

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