The Intangible Element
Your heart resembles pure gold,
It cannot tarnish.
For the purest of metals are deep within the Earth,
just as a person's soul.
Unlike these minerals, that take thousands of years to produce,
All it takes is a few short minutes to see the beauty of the soul.
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I'm a 23 year old college student based out of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Currently working on a full length novel as of Aug 2012 and have a few short stories as well. Open to any feedback, criticism, etc and if interested in knowing more about me or offering professional editing services, please email me at [email protected]
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