Invisible

I used to think you were invisible
that i could never see you
but now i know that that was just a lie

i can see you when i want
can see you where i want
all i have to do is just open my eyes to the world around me
and i’ll never have a doubt

i see that you are everywhere
you are in the world around me
living & alive
and always by my side

i see you in the morning sun
the falling leaves
the baby’s eyes
the whirling wind
and the stars that light the night

open my eyes
let me see
that you are all around me
that i can see you in everything.

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i felt your emotions behind this poem
i felt each word and can sense this is about someone you truly care about
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Powerful expression! 

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