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Invited part 1


One day a girl was invited to a church group.

she did not know most of the people there.

she was shy, and talk much.

if somone were to  talk to her she would only nod her head.

as she started to go more, she started to fit in better.

she started talking more, playing with the other kids.

she was happy for the first time in a while. 

she wasent as stressed.

she even invited a friend to come.

but she did not know she had made her special little place,

were she was happy, a living hell..

 

 

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I want to be a photographer, i love to dance and sing!! I go to a church group called Awana. its very fun! i am a Christian.

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