Is It Me?

my blood beats the story of my life in my own ears.

can you hear it?

is it just me?

my bones throb to run, run for the thought of fear.

can you sense it?

is it just me?

my limbs follow my command, now arm, whipe away that tear.

can you feel it?

is it just me?

my eyes show me wonders,that only my eyes can see.

can you see it?

 is it just me?

my heart keeps me living, but i'm not living, now leave me be.

can you stop it?

is it just me?

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

upnorthdavid

I like this piece! Very effective use of repetition

TamingOfSeaWolves

thank you! I like using repetition a little too much sometimes. 

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