It was a cold day
The concrete covered with crisp ice, sounding like glass breaking after someone makes a step. As I stepped outside, the air thrusts me in my face as though I had just been placed into a bathtub full of ice and needles. My lips slowly turned purple and blue as I stood there unable to move in a fragile state.
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