I've tried

by Nikkigirl

October 26, 2015

I've tried to say i'm sorry

i've tried to be the best

I try only to fail the most important part of life

i try to say im sorry for breaking your heart

It dont matter no more it don't tear you apart

anymorrrrrrreeeeeeeee

so hello from the chains hello from the world that cares hello from the other side

hello from the outside

i can say that ive tried at least i can say that ive tried

to be kind

to you

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NikkigirlOct 27, 2015

<p>this poem is based off of a song i heard by Adele that came out on friday, it is called hello</p><p>it basically is about my biological mother heather ralston and i wrote this based on her and i trying to make things work but it hasn't been working out so i got depressed and also this is about my boyfriend Tanner Newman, he is amazing but its can be really hard sometimes. </p>