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Jack, Old No. 7


To some you are the problem yet he views you as the solution your burn extinguishes a fire within. He fails to see you're only the answer for tonight. This short term fix is all he knows he slaps a band aid on the gaping wound. Tilting the bottle back, he finally feels that sense of nothing he’s craved all day. His body numb and eyes half closed emptiness consumes his soul. That painful memory has been drowned, only to resurface with the morning sun.
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rsulliv3
This was inspire by my personal experience with alcohol abuse in my family. it's affected me greatly and is something I will never forget

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