Jack's Dessert

May 30, 2014

He cries everyday and night

Wishing everything would com out right

But Jack recieves not a thing

Even though he would pantomime and sing

A new approach he tries

No luck rises from his eyes

This time he'll try to be good

If only he would behave as he should

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