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Judge Of Creation


Day Like A Distant... Thought, or Vision * Now Seemingly it Appears as if Nonexistent. * Against the Resistance * Of This Unwanted Division * I stand like that of Repression. * Undesirable the Rejection * of this Fare plea Admission. * Comparably Like Covered Mouths it * Forced The Silence it's own Mutations. * Made by the Hands Of the Mother of This Affliction. * She Who is Always Lacking Discretion * while diminishing , Any Reminiscing * Of Views Ideas & Theology from Attention * in This Repression * I wont let Regression Start Regressing * And Take Away from this Condition. * Cause I've Been Conditioned * to Stand up for my Vision * Against this Aggression Of Oppression. * 2 Different Views That had Trouble mixing. * When Quite Simply In My Prediction * If Given positive Direction * W/ a 10pt. inspection * There'd be less Aspiration Removing The Poisonus injections...of The Negative Resistance It is My Dedication.... in These Honorary Missions and Toe to Toe I'll Stand Against this Affliction Never Denying only Admitting. It Never Had Space to Grow ya see For Instance It was Smothered out & then Faded in an Instant Of What it Shoulda & Coulda Been. Much Like in it was Remission I got No Choice Decision & Shadows of it still Descend. No Never Was it Hesitant. Of What Once Was There still Lies A Remanence Ever Present Then Became this Confliction. But I Never Gave up Fighting for Truth But Purity you Never Relish And Honestly against The Condemnation Or Ever Resisting til all the Negative is Captured this Mission as its Dedicated til Completion. As if it was like A Dream Or an Old Picture with a Broken Frame I'd Been Fixing. Like Some form of Remission Til That which You make So Complicated. And I Never Backed Down or Hesitated. But Had to Watch as it Faded into a NowLong Forgotten Addiction of Affliction.
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My Name Is Joe Lilley w/ The Alias Levi DiVine. I'm A Musician, Poet and Lyricist,

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal struggle with oppression, family conflict, grounded in lived experience.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense idea clustering: oppression, rejection, conditioning, resistance, resilience throughout.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly negative (affliction, rejection, repression) mitigated by defiant resilience.

StillEnergyExplosive

Combative, assertive voice; repeated calls to stand/fight create kinetic momentum.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 50+ lines; extended meditation on internal/familial conflict.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Similes, metaphor (mouths, shadows, broken frame); moderate ornamentation mixed with declarative.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric introspection; internal voice processing personal trauma and defiance.

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