judgement day

by Arobin19

October 12, 2015

when we are born we cry, moms say its okay

what if we knew what was to come

what is known as judgement day

the day that leaves you numb

the day we show what we are

if we can run far

or jump high

tell a good lie

when we seem to worry about nothing

hiding from those that deem us prey

those who know everthing

espesially on judgement day

see who is smart or not

what is good and what is bad

the battles we fought

and days we become sad

who is ready for judgement day

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tillweseethesunOct 13, 2015

In your poem, you mentioned Judgment Day. Are you talking about the day when someone dies and is put before God? I'm talking about when someone dies and is about to go into either Heaven or Hell. I would like to know. I could be totally wrong, and you're talking about something completely different. Lol