Jumping over hurdles

June 3, 2013

I don't know why I think my foes is my friends The definition of a foe is a disloyal person that will stop at nothing to hurt your feelings Once they know your secret its hard for them to keep it The definition of a friend is a loyal person who respects you for you and bring you the truth even if it hurts Now that you know the difference between a friend and a foe which are you going to be So that many eyes will open up and see clearly Because no one wants to be deceived they want to be received

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Insperation4uJun 10, 2013

Thank you

MVP-Most Valuable PoetJun 10, 2013

So that many eyes will open up and see clearly Because no one wants to be deceived they want to be received was the drive behind this poem you are exactly correct about friends and foes-great job in differentating the two keep writing and expanding your ideas