Just Ask
CC BYNevermind, Scratch that.
Don't ask me what I think about the world.
I would go into thousands of words of dialouge just telling you how evil it is.
The world is cruel and unfair.
Only the rich and wealthy get to flourish and grow.
While the unfortunate have to make the rich's dream happen-
There I go.
On a useless tangent.
I'm nice I swear.
Sweetest person you'll ever meet,
I just don't get to express myself out loud.
So I do it in art and poems.
I need a beer.
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˖ ݁♬⋆.˚𝄞Hi I'm Giana, my pronouns are She/Her. I'm a Senior in Highschool!!˖ ݁♬⋆.˚𝄞 I love art, toucans and pizza. I especially love writing my feelings into poems or into a painting instead. I also collect My little pony cards <33!! . Thank you for taking the time to read all of this and I hope you enjoy my works! :3 Good thing come to those who wait ✧✶★.
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Mix of personal frustration and abstract social critique; leans autobiographical
Dense rapid-fire ideas: world criticism, wealth inequality, self-awareness, artistic expression
Predominantly negative (world evil, unfair, cruel) with brief self-defense attempts
Restless, urgent voice with self-interruptions and exclamatory interjections throughout
Approximately 13 lines; fits 7-15 range
Minimal figurative language; mostly direct declarative statements and plain language
Pure lyric internal monologue; confessional and introspective throughout
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