Just a chick fil a thing
Welcome to chick fil- A hi,
you'd like a chicken and fry,
there's a new milkshake flavor you might want to try,
my pleasure have a nice day bye,
the wind blows,
the temperature is dropping in the lows,
I can barely feel my toes,
a bird sitting on a branch suddenly goes,
where he flies off to nobody knows,
a car comes in my lane,
yes okay you want a chicken sandwich plain,
wow it looks like it might start to rain,
despite the weather i'm not going to complain,
suddenly lots of cars come through,
Hi welcome to chick fil-a what can I get for you?
I still see another car or two,
I kept taking orders cause that's what I do
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▾ This Poem's Voice
Your Poem's Voice
Mostly personal work experience; some abstract observation of nature
Dense; multiple ideas per stanza: work, weather, birds, traffic, duty
Neutral-positive; pleasant service language mixed with resignation
Steady, moderate intensity; repetitive service dialogue, some natural movement
Approximately 27 lines; falls in 16-30 range
Minimal figurative language; mostly literal observation and dialogue
Internal lyric voice with work narration; some shift toward persona/role
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