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Just a chick fil a thing


Welcome to chick fil- A  hi,

you'd like a chicken and fry,

there's a new milkshake flavor you might want to try,

my pleasure have a nice day bye,

 

the wind blows,

the temperature is dropping in the lows,

I can barely feel my toes,

a bird sitting on a branch suddenly goes,

where he flies off to nobody knows,

 

a car comes in my lane,

yes okay you want a chicken sandwich plain,

wow it looks like it might start to rain,

despite the weather i'm not going to complain,

 

 

suddenly lots of cars come through,

Hi welcome to chick fil-a what can I get for you?

I still see another car or two,

I kept taking orders cause that's what I do

 

 

 

 

 

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▾ This Poem's Voice

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Mix of personal work experience and observational detail about weather and nature.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense clustering of multiple ideas: work dialogue, weather, bird imagery, traffic, repetition.

DarkSentimentBright

Neutral-positive tone; politeness and duty override cold weather discomfort.

StillEnergyExplosive

Quick-paced dialogue and rapid scene shifts create moderate kinetic intensity.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 24 lines; falls in 16-30 line range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative statements and dialogue.

LyricVoiceDramatic

First-person lyric voice with some dramatic dialogue elements; mostly introspective.

Free Verseidentitynaturerepetitionenjambment

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