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Just Try


Why are you slacking?

Don't take shortcuts

Don't do hacks

If it won't kill you

Keep trying

Just Try

 

Why are you crying?

Don't be depressed

Don't be scared

If it won't hurt you

Keep trying

Just Try

 

Why are you giving up?

You have done so much

You have come so far

It is your dream

And you're just gonna forget about it?

What happened to hard work

What happened to you

Because even the poorest of the poor can accomplish their dream

So, what's holding you back?

Your cowardness?  Your fear?  The society?

You should be ashamed of yourself

Because if your dream really is a dream, 

Nothing should be in your way

Just Try

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