Keep going!
I notice the sun has disappeared I've felt this feeling many times
and though I know what it means I try not to fear and prepare for the climb
Faking a smile, trudging along, and pretending not to care
but the people I pass are all ignorant to the burden that I bear
As days go on my smile has faded, Im tired of pretending
because the climb atop this mountain seems to be never ending
My pace has slowed, my face is flushed finally I've had enough
I'm tired of this uphill battle and trying to be tough
But then I look more closely and in the distance I can see
The sun peaking above the mountain as bright as it can be
My motivation returns and suddenly I'm not hurting
I'm powerful, prideful, strong, and unbreakably determined
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